tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661166796814911221.post436591048194954326..comments2023-11-05T06:50:16.544-06:00Comments on The Non-Review: Who Come The Last [short story]TS Hendrikhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12965357024150434808noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661166796814911221.post-14338863189181361182011-11-04T13:48:56.705-05:002011-11-04T13:48:56.705-05:00Immensely enjoyed reading your short story! I'...Immensely enjoyed reading your short story! I'm terribly gullible so up until the point where the blood & fur is described, I was totally believing it. I just figured the thumping was the cat wanting to get out of the bedroom.<br /><br />Great twist!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11097490501209800455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661166796814911221.post-53780337119248334772011-11-02T18:58:17.183-05:002011-11-02T18:58:17.183-05:00Really good! I'm immediately attracted to tale...Really good! I'm immediately attracted to tales of the undead, even if it's a 24-hour verions. I liked it and hope you do more Tim. You have a great imagination!Pat Tilletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17699973774273291205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661166796814911221.post-52348244709049369022011-11-02T17:48:53.461-05:002011-11-02T17:48:53.461-05:00You had me reeled in with the first line....and I ...You had me reeled in with the first line....and I had to keep reading to see if this was fiction or not....LOL. (Put me in the corner with Robyn).Marlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14877001080913199818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661166796814911221.post-72670975578228995862011-11-01T18:33:43.305-05:002011-11-01T18:33:43.305-05:00Well written and told. Bravo...but I think it'...Well written and told. Bravo...but I think it's a horror not horrow story, right?Chuckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13676928110297819368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661166796814911221.post-74346459567248120142011-11-01T10:23:52.450-05:002011-11-01T10:23:52.450-05:00a ghost story mixed with a zombie plague. I like ...a ghost story mixed with a zombie plague. I like it.Buddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142269413009487783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661166796814911221.post-62526155070049080572011-11-01T07:53:45.615-05:002011-11-01T07:53:45.615-05:00Damn, thought it was real until last part...whew, ...Damn, thought it was real until last part...whew, wipe sweat off forehead...Desertsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15468706620075612245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661166796814911221.post-30405370928868963282011-10-31T21:45:23.192-05:002011-10-31T21:45:23.192-05:00Fantastic horror story. I loved it.Fantastic horror story. I loved it.Bellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14175778756449339363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661166796814911221.post-91889824819423864572011-10-31T20:25:54.929-05:002011-10-31T20:25:54.929-05:00"Enough that I had seen her die by my own han..."Enough that I had seen her die by my own hands. The grotesque cavalcade was more than I could endure."<br />My fave part. Dude! You should do ongoing serials. And maybe just maybe work in some of your visuals.Copyboyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00339752422561039109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661166796814911221.post-32960875454998805262011-10-31T19:32:40.474-05:002011-10-31T19:32:40.474-05:00I kept reading thinking "God I hope this isn&...I kept reading thinking "God I hope this isn't real." I'm naive like that. Plus it's excellently written, TS! It may be the scariest piece I've ever read.<br /><br />xoRobynRawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661166796814911221.post-89007946671426754422011-10-31T17:54:57.010-05:002011-10-31T17:54:57.010-05:00This is year 2 for posting a horrow story on Hallo...This is year 2 for posting a horrow story on Halloween. We'll see if it becomes a tradition.TS Hendrikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12965357024150434808noreply@blogger.com